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News / Re: Career Info
« on: May 10, 2012, 05:49:51 pm »
Conclusion
Student will write a three paragraph essay arguing either for or against the researched career. The paper will take a stance and then be supported with evidence, namely advantages and disadvantages of the career. 
List 5-10 Advantages of the Career





List 5-10 Disadvantages of the Career





1.    Introductory paragraph should grab reader?s attention and include a thesis.
2.   Body paragraph should be thoughtfully organized and advantages and disadvantages should be written in order of importance.  Facts and commentary should be utilized to support thesis and clarify stance.
3.   Concluding paragraph should restate the thesis, but not seem stale.  It should also do one of the following:
?   include a brief summary of the paper's main points.
?   ask a provocative question.
?   use a quotation.
?   evoke a vivid image.
?   call for some sort of action.
?   end with a warning.
?   universalize (compare to other situations).
?   suggest results or consequences.

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News / Career Info
« on: May 01, 2012, 01:47:01 pm »
Location
Pay Period    
                                25%
                                          Median
                                                               75%
California    Hourly    $38.44    $48.48    $59.57
Yearly    $79,960    $100,840    $123,910
Colorado    Hourly    $33.81    $42.92    $52.13
Yearly    $70,330    $89,280    $108,430
Mississippi    Hourly    $24.09    $31.79    $41.33
Yearly    $50,110    $66,120    $85,960
Nevada    Hourly    $28.53    $36.72    $45.00
Yearly    $59,350    $76,380    $93,590
Las Vegas-Paradise MSA    Hourly    $29.05    $36.91    $44.41
Yearly    $60,420    $76,770    $92,380
Reno-Sparks MSA    Hourly    $29.80    $40.43    $52.70
Yearly    $61,980    $84,090    $109,620
West Central Counties    Hourly    $21.91    $23.57    $25.23
Yearly    $45,570    $49,030    $52,480
New Jersey    Hourly    $34.44    $43.96    $54.94
Yearly    $71,630    $91,440    $114,270

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News / Re: Tone of Hoover Dam
« on: April 27, 2012, 11:27:56 am »
            Cryptid Hunters Week Four Quiz

   1.) Marty and Grace experienced an 18,000 ft. fall from the belly of a jet when Grace accidentally activated a button to unlock the parachute route. Grace gets knocked out but Marty stays wide awake, frightened with PD and Bo. Marty manages to stay under control and makes sure everyone is safe, almost letting go of PD and Grace. Marty and Grace end up in a swampy area known as the Congo. Marty and Grace are then split up when Grace is still hung onto the parachute when Marty, Bo, and PD let go.

   2.) Grace begins to have these visions of a gray parrot that leads her through the Congo. Grace thinks that she is going psycho and this gray parrot is now changing the way she thinks, acts, and pursues things in life. Grace experiences changes and is not sure whether this parrot is just a vision and dream, or actually leading her to her parents.

   3.) Wolfe won?t be able to reach Marty and Grace until another week at the most. Wolfe can?t reach Marty and Grace instantly due to him only being to drive the Humvee to the Ubangi River, and then walk to Lake Tele the rest of the way.

   4.) Wolfe became a cryptid hunter due to his father being a hunter when Wolfe was growing up. Noah Blackwood and Wolfe?s father held a yearly meeting to discuss their hunts and Wolfe wanted to be in on that, but not mistreat the cryptids like Blackwood.

   5.) Wolfe thinks that Noah Blackwood is going to start cloning these cryptids. Wolfe has seen many cryptids, especially the El Chupacabra. This El Chupacabra is unlike any species Wolfe has ever seen and it looks as if Noah Blackwood had created a new animal species for the money.

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News / Re: Tone of Hoover Dam
« on: April 13, 2012, 11:04:05 am »
               Discussion Questions

   The bank run occurred when the bank ran out of money because people wanted to cash out everything they put in the bank, and then the bank couldn?t pay out enough to everyone else, which caused riots and extreme madness. One way that this effected the U.S. international politics were that it raised potential candidates to talk more about a plan in order for this not to occur, and the bank ?collapsed? because of all this violence over money.

   Frank Crowe was a hard-working man that made sure that everything about the construction of the Hoover Dam was on time and was determined to construct a masterpiece, the Hoover Dam. Some innovations that made this whole construction possible was that the government approved the right to construct the Hoover Dam, and members would compete with other members as teams to see who got the job done faster, which was like a friendly race as inspiration to one another.

   The significance of the construction of the Hoover Dam is that it was needed to be built 10 times faster and people had to work through extreme heat, and deadly fumes. There also was a $3,000 fine for every day that this masterpiece was late on the job.

   The Dust Bowl happened because there were high altitude winds which pushed what all of the tractors and other farm tools? leftovers away. There was a cold front which causing air to be pushing down and moving all over the place and this is what it resulted in, the Dust Bowl. I?d say that there?s a 50-50 chance that it could have been prevented. The farmers probably couldn?t tell what the weather was like and didn?t know that such high altitude winds were abroad, which made it impossible to stop what they had already done.

   The boxing matches between Joe Louis and Max were such big stories internationally because Joe had won 24 consecutive fights, the fight was for the heavyweight championship, Joe?s family needed the money, and it was a battle for who had the better country, Germany or the U.S., because if Max won he would receive an award from Hitler by taking down Joe. Max won the first fight but then lost the second one, happy that he lost due to the award being so grand and Max was very humble and Max then gave money to Joe in order to support him.


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Reading Journal Entry 3 -

"Cryptozoology," Grace said. "The study of hidden animals."

"How do you study something that's hidden?"

- Page 72; Paragraph 12

One connection I could make to these quotes are that I thought that Bigfoot, the Yeti, and the Lochness Monster were real as a child. As a child you are basically told something and you automatically assume that it's true. I was like that, and believed anything anyone told me, which forced me to believe in all of those cryptids, which obviously aren't existent in reality. The same thing possibly could have happened to Wolfe, but lived on in him forever.

Reading Journal Entry 4 -

"We will," Grace assured him."
"Marty was already checking his e-mail on the Gizmo."

I predict that Marty will find out so many new tools to use the Gizmo for, and he is pretty fascinated with what has already been said. Marty will most likely tell his friend by e-mail about this island and whole journey, seeing as though Marty wants to download some of his drawings for his comic book, and will want to share the great news with his buddy. Grace isn't as fascinated but will make sure that Marty isn't doing anything bad on the island. Also, I predict that Grace and Marty will be able to take their Gizmo's on the trip to the Congo and use it as a weapon for safety.

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History VOCAB -

Adversary - A person, group, or force that opposes or attacks; opponent; enemy; foe.

Aspiration - strong desire, longing, or aim; ambition: intellectual aspirations.

Astronomical - extremely large; exceedingly great; enormous: It takes an astronomical amount of money to build a car factory.

Consumer - Economics such as a person or organization that uses a commodity or service.

Emblematic - pertaining to, of the nature of, or serving as an emblem;  symbolic.

Foreclosure - the act of foreclosing  a mortgage or pledge.

Immortalized - to bestow unending fame upon; perpetuate.

Mesmerizing - to compel by fascination.

Resilience - ability to recover readily from illness, depression, adversity, or the like; buoyancy

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News / Re: Tone of Hoover Dam
« on: March 30, 2012, 11:22:26 am »
            Parrot Constructed Response

   There has been debates on who actually broke the valuable vase, located in Mrs. Hoffman?s house. From Mr. Tom King?s 14 years of experience in training parrots, it seems hard to suspect that the parrot caused the breaking of the vase. The vase was valued at three thousand dollars, and meant the world to Mrs. Hoffman. Mrs. Hoffman claims that she came home one afternoon from the hairdresser, and noticed a horrified face on Billy, only to look in the living room and to her surprise, it had been in disarray. There were pillows all over, a **** vase, and fallen books from the shelves. Mrs. Hoffman argues that the parrot that was sold to her could have caused this tragedy, but Mr. King argues otherwise. Mr. King had been training parrots for 14 years, and directed the movie, ?The Purple Pirate?, where parrots were required to be trained.

   First off, in line 2 of Mrs. Hoffman?s statement, she describes Billy as an intelligent and creative boy; but, could it be that Billy used his intellect and creativity to come up with a story? In line 8 of Billy?s claim, Billy says that the parrot had picked up the pillows off the couch and threw them everywhere. Looking at the picture in Evidence B, there were pillows everywhere, indeed. However, in line 2 of Billy?s story, he states that he was typing a paper. Looking back at Evidence B, there appears to be a pillow right next to the typewriter, blocking Billy from successfully completing his paper.

   Next, in Evidence B it appears noticeable that there was a boomerang dangling off the shelves, and look as if it could easily knock something over. To one?s blind eye, that would pass their mind, but looking deep into the photo you can see that there were trophies on the shelves as well, along with a boomerang. Billy potentially could have been taking a break and decided to try out his boomerang that he enjoyed. Billy then knocked over the vase and placed it on the shelves as a cover-up. Why would there be a boomerang in a living room, anyways? Typically a boomerang gets used outdoors, and shouldn?t be used inside, which Billy knew and tried to cover-up in order to have his reputation remain at a ?good boy?.

   Lastly, it can be seen in Evidence B and C that there are a few items missing. In Mrs. Hoffman?s statement, located at line 16, it was said that the vase had fallen off a table. Looking back at Evidence B and C, it clearly doesn?t have a table located anywhere, and definitely not by the vase. If Mrs. Hoffman?s claim was that the parrot broke the table, then why should she put in facts that aren?t true, like false evidence? Look in lines 5 of Billy?s story, and line 17 in Mrs. Hoffman?s story, and it can be seen that they mentioned a perch and pedestal. Looking back to the evidence, there was not any crate, pedestal, or perch that Long John Silver, the parrot, could have rested on. If Mrs. Hoffman and Billy are telling the truth, why should there be more untrue facts in order to throw detectives off?

   All in all, the process of figuring out who did what will take awhile, analyzing every piece of evidence that was presented. Neither of the two opposing sides wanted the vase to be broken, and the whole thing could have been an accident. With Mr. King?s 14 years of training, it seems impossible that the parrot had done any damage to the vase; however, there are always suspects and only time will tell who broke that expensive vase, and there will be punishments and penalties if there had been lying involved in either of the statements.

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            Journal Responses Week 1

   Day 1
   The dialogue that occurs affects the mood like a negative connotation. This affects the mood by adding suspense to what those dreams were, and why they have returned. Grace?s nightmares most likely foreshadow the future, and the nightmares might just be true.

   Day 2
   The connotative meaning of the words distraught and admiration has a negative connotation. The words mean uncomfortable, stressed, and agitated. This affects the mood, seeing as it adds tension between Marty and Grace, not wanting to leave their school and be forced to move in with their uncle who was never once mentioned to either child. Marty and Grace begin to feel uneasy and worried.

   Day 3
   ?..No, sir. We haven?t found her yet.?
      - Who is she, and why are they looking for her?
   ?..No,? the man said. ?My name?s Phil Bishop, and this is my wife-?
      - How come Uncle Travis didn?t pick the children up?
   ?...Ah yes . . . The tragedy in the jungle. So, the children are going to live with him??
      - How does Blackwood know about Wolfe and why should the children be a concern?

   Day 4
   ?..Don?t you think that?s a little strange Marty??
   
   Throughout all of chapter four, Marty and Grace had been spooked out by the appearance of Uncle Travis? house on the island. At the end of the chapter, Marty and Grace find out the Cryptos Island means ?Hidden Island? and there is now a mysterious mood. Marty and Grace are now horrified and spooked out by what the name means, and are eager to know why the uncle has never been mentioned for sure now.

   Chapter Summary -
   Grace has had nightmares since she was two to six years old, and they have just came back, and especially at the wrong time. The twins, Marty and Grace, become worried and uneasy when they are forced to move out of their boarding school to live with their uncle who was never mentioned to either of them. Marty and Grace are greeted by their uncle?s maid and butler, finding out that he lives at an island just off the coast of Washington, and wonder why it wasn?t their uncle that was there to pick them up. Marty and Grace become spooked out by the fact that their uncle?s house looks like a haunted, abandoned house, and find out that ?Cryptos Island? means ?Hidden Island.?
   

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News / Re: Tone of Hoover Dam
« on: March 29, 2012, 11:18:25 am »
               Parrot Essay

   There has been debates on who actually broke the valuable vase, located in Mrs. Hoffman?s house. The vase was valued at three thousand dollars, and meant the world to Mrs. Hoffman. Mrs. Hoffman claims that she came home one afternoon from the hairdresser, and noticed a horrified face on Billy, only to look in the living room and to her surprise, it had been in disarray. There were pillows all over, a **** vase, and fallen books from the shelves. Mrs. Hoffman argues that the parrot that was sold to her could have caused this tragedy, but Mr. King argues otherwise. Mr. King had been training parrots for 14 years, and directed the movie, ?The Purple Pirate?, where parrots were required to be trained.

   First off, in line 2 of Mrs. Hoffman?s statement, she describes Billy as an intelligent and creative boy; but, could it be that Billy used his intellect and creativity to come up with a story? In line 8 of Billy?s claim, Billy says that the parrot had picked up the pillows off the couch and threw them everywhere. Looking at the picture in Evidence B, there were pillows everywhere, indeed. However, in line 2 of Billy?s story, he states that he was typing a paper. Looking back at Evidence B, there is a pillow right next to the typewriter, blocking Billy from successfully completing his paper.

   Next, in Evidence B it is noticeable that there was a boomerang dangling off the shelves, and look as if it could easily knock something over. To one?s blind eye, that would pass their mind, but looking deep into the photo you can see that there were trophies on the shelves as well, along with a boomerang. Billy potentially could have been taking a break and decided to try out his boomerang that he enjoyed. Billy then knocked over the vase and placed it on the shelves as a cover-up. Why would there be a boomerang in a living room, anyways? Typically a boomerang is played outdoors, and shouldn?t be used inside, which Billy knew and tried to cover-up in order to have his reputation remain at a ?good boy?.

   Lastly, it can be seen in Evidence B and C that there are a few items missing. In Mrs. Hoffman?s statement, located at line 16, it was said that the vase had fallen off a table. Looking back at Evidence B and C, it clearly doesn?t have a table located anywhere, and definitely not by the vase. If Mrs. Hoffman?s claim was that the parrot broke the table, then why should she put in facts that aren?t true, like false evidence? Look in lines 5 of Billy?s story, and line 17 in Mrs. Hoffman?s story, and it can be seen that they mentioned a perch and pedestal. Looking back to the evidence, there was not any crate, pedestal, or perch that Long John Silver, the parrot, could have rested on. If Mrs. Hoffman and Billy are telling the truth, why should there be more untrue facts in order to throw detectives off?

   All in all, the process of figuring out who did what will take awhile, analyzing every piece of evidence that was presented. Neither of the two opposing sides wanted the vase to be broken, and the whole thing could have been an accident. With Mr. King?s 14 years of training, it seems impossible that the parrot had done the breaking of the vase; however, there is always suspects and only time will tell who broke that expensive vase, and there will be punishments and penalties if there had been lying involved in either of the statements.

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News / Tone of Hoover Dam
« on: March 27, 2012, 11:17:33 am »
The tone of the short story, "The Art of the Dam",  is honored and elated. Everyone can agree that the way the Hoover Dam is described makes it seem like a great accomplishment and achievement to what humans can do, and why they have come so far. Humans look up to the Hoover Dam and can't stop being in awe, feeling proud of what people can do. Who would ever think that regular human beings can get so far? It's truly amazing to what people can do, as long as they set their mind to it. Being a child, computers and all that other technology has been here since birth, but past generations would see this as a true beauty, and many must have been shocked and looked at that magnificent piece of artistic structure as a wonder.

A few words that were used to describe the tone in this passage would be marvel of modern engineering, grand design, and glorious example of modern art. All of these compliments and praise towards the sculpture are all positive, and all revolve around how modern it is and how beautiful and uplifting it is to look at the masterpiece. Like previously mentioned, many people would have been in shock to see such a great and uplifting work of art right in front of their eyes. The workers must have worked so hard to create this "marvel of modern engineering" and the designer should feel great for constructing this "grand design". Many could argue that they have seen better, and this is just some type of electricity generator, but it also stands proud as a marvelous example of human accomplishment and achievements.

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News / The Essayyyyyy
« on: March 21, 2012, 11:21:45 am »
Paper bags are far less reliable, more wasteful, and more harmful than they should be, and the producers need to stop creating them. Sure, the bags are fast production at a rate of 1800 bags per hour! But, the rate that these paper bags are being created are far more than the speed it takes to grow a tree. All of the trees being made are just getting wasted on bags that can even mess up in the fast production by one tiny error. It has been said that paper bags are really easy to make; however, usually if something seems easy to make, it will most likely break even easier. Almost everyone has had a lunch in a brown paper bag where it just breaks out of nowhere, because of all the weight when it's only about three pounds, if that. The paper bag has been called "the perfect bag", and that's more of an opinion than fact. How many times has a paper bag just been thrown away and forgotten? If something was so perfect, anyone could agree that it would not be wasted. As stated before, the producers of the paper bag should really stop creating them, and they are harming the environment.

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News / Re: My Essay
« on: March 19, 2012, 03:52:47 pm »
http://artsedge.kennedy-center.org/interactives/harlem/classroom/activity1.html

http://faculty.lagcc.cuny.edu/eiannotti/harlem/harlem.htm

Notes:

Part 1

Myers creates a mood or feeling of compassion and feels bad for everyone and all the hard struggles in discrimination through races, which is why they migrated.

Unsure locations or people ?
Trinidad - larger and more populous of the two major islands and numerous landforms which make up the island nation of Trinidad and Tobago.
Goree Island -  one of 19 communes to the city of Dakar, Senegal
Jack Johnson ? became first African American world heavyweight championship (boxing)
Joe Louis ? African American world heavyweight boxing champion from 1937 to 1949
Sugar Ray ? African American professional boxer ? known as the greatest boxer of all time
Strivers? Row ? stretch between 7th and 8th avenues on 138 and 139th streets
                  Part 2

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News / My Essay
« on: March 16, 2012, 06:10:17 pm »
Donovan, Tanner
English Kang, Period 6
Friday, March 16, 2012
Kony 2012
   The question, ?Do you think Kony 2012 is legitimate?? happens to be asked nowadays, after that video went viral. Nobody actually knows the background about Kony 2012, and whether the video was made as a type of scam or people actually care seems questionable. The makers of the video definitely had to put a ton of time into the video, seeing as the video includes thirty minutes of pure editing in order to bring people to the event or occasion; however, some people are against the concept and believe the clips are fake and just a scam to take their money. The Kony 2012 campaign was in affect for a year now and as soon as a video goes worldly, many people suddenly support it. There are many other problems in the world right now, and this could be considered a scam, creating distractions on other worldwide problems such as SOPA. The answer given to that question ?Do you think Kony 2012 is legitimate?? could be answered by no, and can be proven in fact, not theory.
   Kony 2012 was said to not be a non-profit organization to start out with. Although there are requirements to pay for t-shirts and bracelets, that should be on their own money due to guilt and feeling ashamed of what happens with Joseph Kony, including all the bad he supposedly does. The campaign has brought in about 8 million dollars so far and only 25 to 33 percent of that money actually goes to the campaign. If 25 percent of the earned money was to go to the actual campaign in order to help stop Joseph Kony, then only 2 million dollars would go to the African nation to stop this violence. The other 6 million dollars has not been told of what it goes to, but that should be a red flag right there in order to stop sending money. The Kony campaign receives support from all over the world; however, many are unaware of the percentage that actually goes to the campaign, 25 percent, and should be informed in order to request their money back immediately. The founders of Youtube should honestly take the video down, seeing as though there are many complaints saying how fake the video seems to be.
   All in all, this revolves around only one person?s stand on the Kony 2012 discussion. This attempt at stopping Joseph Kony was going on since last fall, and nobody has caught onto it until this video went viral. How could a video make so many supporters come together and donate money that could be going to a non-profitable charity organization of some sort, rather than a supposed scam? Many could argue that the t-shirts, bracelets, and all other attire makes the other 6 million dollars disappear, but where does the money from the sales of the attire go to? Instead of selling all of this attire, the campaign founders should actually let the government aware of all that happens in the world, rather than sitting there collecting money and making profits. If the campaign founders actually tried to stop this crisis, then they should probably get over to the African nation and put a stop to it immediately. As humans, opinions are made, and there are many viewpoints to look at the topic of Kony 2012.

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Suggestions / Re: Donation Tab + Webclient
« on: June 25, 2011, 05:18:19 pm »
Uhh Jake, we will have to wait till we get the webhost to add a tab, and I'd get my friend to do it for me... Because well, it isn't exactly easy.
Get that jiggaboo arno

He doesn't code forums ..

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Suggestions / Re: Donation Tab + Webclient
« on: June 25, 2011, 05:11:10 pm »
Uhh Jake, we will have to wait till we get the webhost to add a tab, and I'd get my friend to do it for me... Because well, it isn't exactly easy.

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Suggestions / Re: Suggestions;
« on: June 25, 2011, 05:10:05 pm »
I am probably gonna do a vote thing like TRPK has, every 100 votes we will do an event which the server proposes or suggests we do.

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